by Tiny Reader Nov 15, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Blinded by this misery |
by Dreams
I really like your first 2 stanzas, it is strong and deep. However though, the transition between the second and third stanza is kind of abrupt. Still, maybe it's just me. =) |
by ratchild666
This poem proves ur great at expression emotions. its really effective. and i love this line: |