Its a great poem, i love the theme, so true. I like the wording used, intelligent and creative. sorry i can't say more, but i'm in a bit of a rush...sorry

Brad

That was really cute. There were a lot of memories in there. It makes me think back on the days when me and my little brother were younger. Keep up the amazing job.
> Kiesha

Aww this poem is really cute I like it alot. I love how creatve it was and how you worded it you did a great job keeep itt up! : )

That's so cute! I find this most interesting because I have an OLDER brother, and I'm the baby. My name is Jamie, so yeah, I made a conection, but being the baby really does stink, especially when there is a 12 year difference. As the older sibling, you should guid him as best you can. 5/5, great poem!

That is so adorable i loved it!!!=)

This is a really great poem really like it keep it up
xoxo robyn