Wow...:O
i really loved that it was amazing i could completely relate and see your depression. It's weird how we all seem to label it you know? i guess it's because of it's incredibly strong powers...
take care huni xoxoxo

I loved your poem. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Omgsh! I love it! I loved how you really described what depression is! I know how you feel too...I fall into depression alot but am always saved by my friends. Well I really love it and I give it a 5/5! GREAT JOB! Keep it up!

I love this poem!...It is very very good, and I can relate...Awesome job

Well, you commented my poem..And told me to look here..and I did. I'm glad I did. Its a very good poem =)
Thankyou +hugs+
x

This is a wonderful poem!! I can relate to it. It's really well written. And thank you so much for the sweet comment on my poem. I am always here too, if you need to talk or something. I'm a very good listener :)

The poem concept was good and since it ws basedon real life you were able to make the reader feel the emotions going through the lines. When I found out there as a knife involved in your explaination I kind of got weirded out, no offence. I just don't like to have the image of blood in my mind lol.

The title was self-explanitory. The stanzas seemed to fit together. It had a lot of elements of a sad poem.

OMG! This poem is freaking AWESOME! KEEP IT UP! If you keep writing then I'll keep reading! GREAT JOB! You're in my faves! Loved it. 5/5 all the way!

It seems sometimes like about 75% of the people on this site are depression sufferers, and in all honesty I would say 75% of those are increedibly BAD at characterizing their struggle effectively. But this is good. This makes me want to read it through to the end. It takes simple forms and a very basic poetic structure and weaves it into something gently compelling.

And for that you are to be commended. I don't hand out 5s very often. :-)