Wow, hun this is absolutely amazing, I loved how you made this poem unique and beautiful by using such vocabulary and emotion from the heart, I loved the concept of a price tag on a cutter, very clever, well done, take care

Wow hun amazing...
these were my fav lines:
"I will make my wrist be the one to pay
the debt for driving you so far away"...
so true.
thankyou so much for your comment, those words mean so much to me.
I know what you mean about just sticking it through and fighting but it's so hard when i don't see the point, when there's not something i'll achieve or anything...i just always fail.
i htink you know what i mean..
always here if you ever want to talk..
xoxoxooxo

I think this poem would make a great song as well. It was a very emotional write, I'm sure it was extremely hard to put it all down. You did a good job of keeping the flow the same throughout the poem. I admire that. I think you have a lot of potential. I really do hope things will get better for you, no one deserves to be in such pain. Please take care, and know that I appreciate all of your wonderful comments. I will keep reading.

~rolo

Well first i would like to start off with syaing thank you so much for the comment it meant alot to me it really did, and now on to the poem lol, this poem is amazing i can relate to it extremely well, i have also made my wrist and various other places pay the debt for loosing that one guy, it haunts me still, i like to think im on my to quiting, but i don't get my hopes up because i know i have let so many down including myself. i especially liked how you repeated the one verse, i think it really added something to your poem, i will deffinately keep reading your poems

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Thanks everyone, your words mean a lot to me, I mean seriously you have no idea.

-Mikochan

I completely agree with your end messafe, and this poem was amazing. I recently found out that my girlfriend cuts, and it was pretty hellish and bad. I know so many people that do cut, and I think it is a horrible thing to do. Try instead of cutting, do some random thing to keep your mind off it. Anyways, amazing poem, and I hope to read more.

Matt

Thank you so much for writing this poem. I can immagine how painful it is to write about it. But it's an eyeopener. Very very well done.

I would like to thank you for you comment on my poem called "girl let me help you". It meant a lot to me. I took your advice to my heart, and I will tell her that. It really means a lot to me, cause it's just so hard. I understand it's harder for the cutter, but it hurts me too. I don't want to lose her. And saying "everything is going to be just fine" doesn't help. SO thank you so much for your advice. That was very kind of you.

You are a very talented writer, I have read some of you poems. And I will read more later. You are very good.

Excellent poem girl, I am very happy to hear you don't cut anymore. It gives me hope. Gives me the hope she will get better soon *tears in my eyes* Oh.. dam..

Anyway, I just don't know what to say, just thank you thank you thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Lots of love,
take care sweety
-xxx-

Wow...another great poem by you. I love the line "I am broken, forever torn" it holds so much emotion. It shows how cutting affects people and it's not just a 'stunt' to get attention people. I love your poem...I know I'm not alone out here. XxXx

I love the way you've structured this and it flows very well. A more original poem about cutting, I think. Well written, highest praises from me. I hope that you stay strong and I admire you so much.
Best wishes
*VioletRaven*

Oh, wow. excellent poem. i'm definitly giving you a 5. i can relate to the cutting part. don't worry, i'm trying to stop. thanks for the comment on my poem broken. it meant a lot to me. sure, i'll write you if i ever want to talk. thanks again!!!!
**lisa**

All i can say is wow...i know exactly how you feel and ive been through it too. your extremly talented. great write
and good luck..

Jason Kramer

Hey well what all you just said really really got me thinking..i am a cutter and have been for years..yeah it is hard to stop...i think im just scared to..b/c its my life..if i didnt have it to turn to i dont know what i would do but i would really like to talk to you..if you have aim my sn is... youngbabii23 you can im me there..if not my email is youngbabii23@aim.com..ok i would reallly love to talk to you..you seem liek you could really make a difference in someone's life and that's what i need right about now!! good job hunnie! xo nelle

It is sad to see when you're friends cut, it is truely heart breaking to know that they feel the low and that much pain. is hard to stay by their side when they continue to hurt themselves
you did a really nice job on this poem
well done

Ur poems are amazing and id just like to say thanku cos they have helped me a lot xxx

Awwww... sweet poem...

and as for my poem... "Please Hold Me Tight," my point was, I wanted somone to hold me tight, like a child somewhat, and tell me, everything was going to be okay... and reassure me, that I'm loved, when I feel like I wanna die inside... know what I mean?

thanks for the comments... you are a great poet yourself! :o) ... keep it up!

Michelle

Wow, Great poem 5/5. It really touched me! Your a talented writer. And umm In your profile it says that your in recovery for depression and stuff, May i ask what do you do, Like When you decide you want professional help, What happens?

- natz x0x

I know that the poem was supposed to be sad but it wasn' just sad. It showed some talent that she would taken seriously and not forgotten.

It is great therapy for others to know that there is away out of life situations.

Continue to use your ecperiences, it does help othes and yourself to talk about things. You may never know who you turned around after reading your life out loud...

mario....

You know what? You're a real insperation. To write about your past like this. And let everyone out there know that you can get through it, Is a really beautiful thing. I'm really gald I have read your poems, Weird as it might sound. But they mean alot to me. Some of them just pour out feelings that I can't express. So well done. You're an amazing writer. Don't ever stop! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

I understand how you feel but i wish i was as strong as you i mean i am still a cutter and i don't know if i will ever be able to stop. i mean i did lose almost every one. my dad don't want to be with me my mom was never there and my two sisters don't want me to be around them because of they don't want me to see their kids.

so i understand how just one little thng can run your life for you. it cause so much pain but not in the way i wanted it to. i wanted to know that i was a live but it cause every one that i loved around me leave me it hurt.