by EMILIE Nov 15, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
When you make me cry and make me feel like I have nothing to give, and that my life is pointless and wonder why I live, I want you to look inside of me and see all pain your really causing, but because your really not that bad I just want you to know you hurt a friend maybe the only true one that you ever had. |
by Asha
I think that your poem is good, however you may consider putting it into a more poetic format. Keep up the good work, and keep up your spirits. I hope things work out well for you. |