by LadyPearl Nov 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Finally the awaited breath of release |
Wow , awsome poem, keep it up your a talented writer, 5/5 thx for taking the time to read mine |
by amelia
Awesome... deserves nothing short of 5/5 |
Again gr8 use of description....this shows sadness, and giving up hope...all mixed 2gether into a perfect blend which is this poem....gr8 work! 5/5! |
An excellent poem, very fluid and nice use of vocabulary. Great poem |
Great poem. the structure is very effective and the rhyming subbtle so doesn't interupt the flow nor distract from the meaning. |