by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life Nov 15, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
new love
I look into your eyes |
Pretty good didnt rythm all the way but still give it 5/5 |
by SplitSided
That wasn't that bad i noticed you dint have a rhyme scheme at all that's the style i've got but i'm gettin tired of it but thanks for givin your 2 cents hit me back sometime...keep your head up peace |