'Now I can live, just knowing your hear'
I think there's some typo here? Should it be '.....you're near? or ...you're here?' If I'm wrong just ignore me. =)

Okay now the poem. I thought this is really great! Initially I thought it's gonna be a sad poem. But it keeps me smiling along after the 4th stanza. The words are great, the emotions are there. I like how you started this poem, great ideas there. This is excellent stuff.