Beautiful

This is so sweet..i think lol, i didn't completly understand if it was a positive or negative poem but i kinda got like when you're waiting for the line you're anxious and exciting because it's going to be good and you love it... so i guess it's good right? anyways i love the simile this was short and see how much you made me think, you're really talented i think i'll add you to my favorites : )