Awesome poem, i really liked the idea of like another personality taking control, awesomeness xxxx

I like this one, my favourite i think. Really powerful, really chilling. Damn, kinda scary. Damn.

Great poem great way of describing the feeling super idea.

Excellent, loved how this was composed xxxx

Holy s*** that is amazing, i don't know how you do it, you put these images in my head and make me think, but yet i understand it, but i still think about it after a while, you leave me like speechless with your poems its amazing, i am so jealous lol honestly 5/5

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Too amazing to put into words. You are THE BEST poet on this site. And that is the complete truth, no lie. I amjust truly blown away by all of your poems. You better keep writing, this was pure... Idk But it made me shiver. Fantastic. Full points, of course.

_______________________________Matt___________________

Emma, you rock. =)

It's really wonderful poem! Nice theme and nicely written! Good job indeed.

Very nicely written.. I loved the flow.. xx:

blaine *> : PainOfOne

Hey, thanku so much every1, ur comments are really encouraging! :)
they mean so much to me. take care,
emma xxx

Emma this is bloody amazing, your talent is mind blowing, I really enjoying the subject matter and how you put this together, keep the poems coming I look forward to more

thankyou ever so much for your wonderful comments they mean a lot thankyou again

much love
Jenn

Wow that was amazing
i felt the emotion

Omg huni, u r so talented, u r so full of emotion that i wish i could help u take away ur pain!! im here 4 y0o babe if u need me! 5/5 luv ya

Thanku every1, ur comments mean a lot, lots of love xxxx

Emma, Your poems are amazing they leave me w/o words......which is an amazing feat for me.....dont ever stop writing......it would be a loss to this world.
*smiles* Michelle

That was amazing, it describes things i can never seem to put into words. You are an amazing poet. I'm always here for you.
Luv Vix xxxxx :)

An original take on what is quickly becoming the most written about subject on this site. it was brilliantly written and you deserve the comments above.

Hi, its not an idiotic question at all! its kind of like another personality in my head, like the part of my mind telling me to cut, rather than the part which doesn't want it to happern, if u get what i mean. hope this helps.
thanku for ur comments every1,
much luv,
xxemxxx

Another great write. I really suck at commenting constructively sorry lol. But I think it's really good =) xxx

That was really scary, definitely a 5/5, you are probably my favourite poet, or at least one of the top 3. Keep writing!

Hey thanks for the comment! u r a great writer i love ur work 5/5