Trying new styles is always fun, i think this one worked for you I noticed however one of the stanza's has 3 lines and another has 5 was that intentional? the content is ace so imnot even gonna go there=P Keep it up, Ive been trying to write a new poem to night but nothing of vaule has come out. Thankyou for all you comments, i was sad to hear you've run out of them though=( lol, Someday I hope to talk to you outside of comments,.. till then,

Much love
Hugs
Jenn

Thank you hun :D and no, the different verses in the stanzas was no planned, it just flowed better like that lol.

Wow. i hope you are happy and this poem is true. take care.

I knwo how you feel. I LOVE this poem awesome job 5

Well written, introspective and heartfelt. I love it.

Loved it!! wow...
that's great to hear and quite inspirational actually..
take care xoxo