My god, this is truly felt. There's great pain here, please don't ever resolve to suicide. This poor girl's life is laid out clearly in this poem, her emotions, her experiences, her pain and feelings are very well portrayed. It's nice to know there's a happy ending. =)

Very good poem. Tonnes of imagery and emotion, it makes it really powerful. Another great poem x

Wow, that was REALLY good!..i hope ur okay..i'm here to talk to if u want, i know u don't know me..but i'm just trying to show i care, ya know? well, that was REALLY GOOD! i luved it!..5/5 from me!

Wow hun i have no idea how u do it. Wen i read ur poems im in another world...in urs. God it's weird!!
um i really hope you're ok..
i agree wit lil o btw:P
much love xoxo

Please tell me all of your new poems aren't true...have you been cutting again? awwwww hunni i wish i could just wrap you into a big hug and make everything ok. Im sorry your hurting so much and so badly, and as always im here for you and i always will be, i promised you on that one and i intend on keeping that promise. I lvoe you SOOO much hun, Trisha

~Hurting Inside~