This poem is really good. the rhyming is sutble and not overpowering but still strong enough to hold the structure together. its really good.

I like this a lot. Do you ever write songs at all? If not you should consider it, to me this poem seems to lend itself to that form. Good job.

Great job! This poem really speaks to me and it's very well written.

AMAZING POEM... TOO GOOD
TOO DEEP
5/5
LOVE
AMY

Wow great poem! loved the structure and the flow...but yeh, would of been kwl if it ws maybe a little bit longer. jesxx

The only thing I don't like are the o yes I did parts.. which means I like everything else about it.. and between you and me: that never happens!

Wow.... really powerful, you're words work perfectly and it reads really well. I like the story you've used, it has alot of meaning.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Wow that was awesome!!! it twas very very well written... I cant even comment on the commas lol (Which I do often) so again thats evern better good job!