My Birthday Song

by End Of Eternity   Nov 16, 2005


In the month of october
my life was activated
in the search of door to exit
for 27 years I simply waited

the year was 1977
I came from door, right next to heaven
since then a simple life I have lead
since then I have felt being dead

this life has just been a mystery
somehow these relations meant nothing to me
promises of living as one
turn your back and they make fun

all you should do is buy things you need
no matter if its love, you can buy that indeed
all your friends need is your money
yes my dear puppet, this life is funny

this is something I would not like to live for
with little patience, I know I will find the door

in upcoming month of october
I will go back to where I belong
in this upcoming year
I will enter door I came from

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Another poem full of pain and sad emotions.
    I am so glad these feelings have left your mind.

    in upcoming month of october
    I will go back to where I belong
    in this upcoming year
    I will enter door I came from

    I am so glad you did not go back through that door.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    I can easily feel where this one came from. Without a meaning, without a will to live we often do feel like to go back to where we came from. I hope you have found a new meaning of life in between these couple of months. When life has a new meaning, living it is sure worth it. Loved it!!!

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Noooooh you can´t go back to the door you came from,... I like you here, just as you are. that works out better in my oppinion...

    My favorite part of this poem is:
    all you should do is buy things you need
    no matter if its love, you can buy that indeed
    all your friends need is your money
    yes my dear puppet, this life is funny

    AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT I TELL YOU!

    you are right, as you probably didn´t need me to tell you.. But I feel as though I could´ve written that, I have thought about it very often, I just couldn´t think of the right words... and you have done it! *A Salute!*

    love,
    ~*TasH*~

  • 18 years ago

    by KrypticKristen

    I love this poem its amazing but really sad...cheer up hun xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow...sad:'(
    please dont feel this way!!
    hope you're ok tho..seriously..
    xoxox

More Poems By End Of Eternity