In a single second dat i read your poem I smiled I lived I dream and I cried....... U write so beutiful. I kept reading it and i fell like i was there.. I just hope it isn't a true story cuz it's too sad and if it is im so sorry...She lives on true your words... I loved it keep it up and keep writing from the heart... Imma go get a tissue snifle snifle ='l 5/5.....

Its true...........i felt like i was there too. I could almost see your (dream) daughters face.....you really have a way with words!! And now i'm addicted lol i read one poem and i have to keep reading!! If you ever need to talk dont forget.......im a good listener lol
luv jess xoxo

Wow.....is this really true? If I've said it once I've said it a million times you are sooo amazing!!!!!!

Oh Justin, this one is truely amazing. I hope its not a true story. The flow of the poem was excellent. I loved the way you gave those little details. Excellent job!!!