Good poem 5/5 you should check out some of my love poems

Great poem, very well thought of. The only thing I recommend is editing
"itâ??s her youâ??ve", just because it takes off some of the focus of this poem. (don't worry that happens alot, just click edit and hurry and change it) terrific job, 5/5

Great poem, hun! I really enjoyed reading it. Fantastic job