This is truly lovely, a very sweet dedication to your first love. Your lines read of love like none other, very beautuful. Nice idea you've there, written it in a letter-style. I like it a lot, thanks for sharing. =)

This is a great poem and i really love it...u have a way with wordz...keep it up...and i sent u the picz and u know...check them out

FANTASTIC POEM! Best one i have read in a long time. Great job, I love the pattern of it and the flawless rhyming.