One Question: Does She Love You...Like I Love You?

by christina marie   Nov 16, 2005


To:
My Baby
(Yep, that's you)

From:
The Girl Who ALWAYS Loves You
(Not that girl you're with now)

Hmm...how do I start this note out for you?
I don't even know where to start,
I guess I better write,
Exactly what's in my heart...

Was it my fault...that we fell out of love?
Was I never good enough?
Does she love you better than me?
My most important question though, is can she love you like I love you?

Does she kiss down your neck, when you guys cuddle?
Does she hold you really close?
Does she stare in your eyes, like I did to you?
But does she love you like I love you?

Can she make you smile, when you want to cry?
Make you want to live, when you want to die?
Does she touch you the way I do?
Does she love you like I do?

Did she ever whisper in your ear, telling how much she loved you?
Did she ever tell all of her friends about you and her?
Did she ever give you the butterflies, when you kissed?
Does she love you like I love you?

"Some things are meant to be lost,
Rather not be found,
Some people go away,
While others stick around." (God, what a philosophy to live by!)

Some people they feel sorry for me,
Every day they see me cry,
My mother always blames YOU for the scars,
I don't exactly know why. (I mean, I was the one who did it.)

I sit in the chair, just cutting...
Cutting, cutting away,
Cutting at the thought,
Of all the "I love you's" that we'd say...

My friends they all worry,
I don't care at all.
I guess you were the person,
Who watches me as I fall.

I haven't quite moved on,
I mean, you chose her over me...
Some things should be left alone,
Just like my heart and me...

So please don't show up at the funeral,
My dad might have a fit,
He doesn't like what you've done to me,
Hell, he doesn't like YOU one bit!

Don't show up at my grave,
I'm already damned for life,
I lost you, my great accomplishment,
After all that strife.

This is the end of the note...sorry it's so bloody,
I cut because it's the only thing I could think of to do...
I'm dying out of love, but, I have just one last question...
Can that girl, love you...like I still do...?

Signed,
The Girl Who ALWAYS Loves YOU...
More Than Her Own Life

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I dunno, I tried writing something, vote
and/or comment, tell me how bad this is,
I really need some tips, thanks!
**Lollipop**
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(C) Christina Hurley.
11-16-2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by katrina

    Hey i liek your peom your good it realates in alot of ways to me, but not over who i losted eho over my mom lost becasue of me

  • 18 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Babe i love you so much~hugs u tight~ love you lots-britt

  • No no no no. it wasn't bad at all.
    i loved it. I'm goign through this too. My best friend likes my ex...but secretly i still love him. and i feel like no one in this world will ever care about him the way i cared about him. and guess what?? YOUR ON MY FAVORITES LIST TOOOO. =]]]
    wonderful job.

    teenage tragedy|♥|

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyle

    Great job. it's cute. LOL

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Wow, this is amazing! First of all because I was (or am, I don't know yet) in the same situation, except that I haven't thought of dying or cutting!
    And secondly because it's so imaginative,the writing style is great!
    Thanks for commenting on my poems! It really means a lot to me!!!