Vampire

by velvet kiss   Nov 16, 2005


It was hot and cold
sometimes new and always old
I was young and bold
My soul had been sold
It was the trill
of the devil's kill
It is the wound that won't heal
and he always comes against my will
I am a creature of the night
I always cause such a fright
and there is a legend about my bite
but with my race, it's alright
I am the Vampire
and I never tire
My throat is continuously on fire
So is this what they all admire?

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow! really nicely done!!! very nice structure and very well written keep it up!! ~roxy~

  • 19 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Cute little poem, Vanessa. The rhythm works so well that it could easily be put to music. The three sets of four stanzas flow beautifully. All I can suggest is that you put a space between them to make the structure more obvious. If you have any more poems on the site, I'll definitely check them out. 4/5

More Poems By velvet kiss