This one is really, really good. I love how you use metaphors in it to show how you are feeling. Much love! --Lauren

Sweet poem :)

I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!