O.O wow...5/5

Hello, this was equally exceptional as your otehr poems. absolutely breathtaking. rock on
-Suzie

Very thought-provoking! Keep it up!

Violet, an amazing poem It's just how it feels. Truly beautiful, just like your others :)

Sleeping Ugly

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5/5 If this is how u feel i hope 2 it goes away!but things will change n death is not the answer!luv ur poems so much!u r really n truly telented!...josie....

I know I have already commented on all of your poems but I just wanted to thank you for your comment on mine. That means a lot to me that you read them. Thank you so much. I read and voted on some of your quotes too. Very good! I'm looking forward to reading any more poems you submit! And once again you are an amazing poet and thank you!

:'( This poem is so sad... if you ever need to talk, I'm here for ya. You are an amazing writer, and this poem really spoke to me. Great job!

Wow, I can sense the emotion behind your words, really effective piece. I noticed how you changed the rhythm of the lines in different stanzas, and I think it worked really nicely and didn't come off as disjointed. I'm always trying to find ways to do this in my stuff aswell.