This poems really good! reminds me of what I used to get up to! Well done! xxx

The good old days. Great poem... I miss shadow tag lol. Ah well, take care.
~Jaime

Great poem.So many wonderful images, and the wistful nostalgia of youth you conjour up is fantastic.I like what you are expressing(I tackled a similiar theme in my own piece 'Childhood Lasts Forever').The rhyme scheme is good, a nice natural flow, and the emotions, the memories, yes, the memories....Very well written.

Holy smokes... I don't even know what to say!! This poem is so cute and so beautiful. I wish I could write this way. Keep up the excellent work, I love your poems!