Omg, i thought it was gonna be a happy ending, plaese dont start self harming one day u will find a girl who is worth it and who will no how much you r worth. well take care mate. and dont let it get to u some r beauty on the out and cold on the in others the opposite and others beauty on the in and out u just have to find someone with a heart. take care.

Nice. Even better than the one before and hope to read the next part where she.....I dont want to give it away.........or do I?

This poem is really good you keep leaving us wanting more, too bad matt already told me what happens

Good poem i can't wait til the next one it like a tv show

Its like dumbass

DONT DO IT.. NOOOO! You cant, thats not the way to end your sorrows! Man, I've gotten so used to reading the first, second and now the third, that its like a story, but better.. because you know its true. Good job!

-Jennifer.

Thats amaing writing you do. i know how it feels:-( but still *5/5

Wow..Robert these poems..yes these...are beautifully written..and if they are at all true...how could someone do that to u...well ne way..Icant wait for the 4th installment..Love Always..Joclyn..

p.s thankyou for the comment....

Oh my god...this isnt true is it?? i reeeelly hope not! but ill be loking forward to pt. 4 so... ill talk to u later
Raychel

Damn! I haven't read one and two but this is really sad!
I hope you didn't go through this!
you are gifted in the way of writing.. I like everything I've read.
looking forward to part four.. hoping for a happy ending.

love,
*tash*

Awesome...ur poems r getting better each time you write them...and man....that is so so good...can't wait to see more from you...finally got some time to read your poems...btw...I think it's one of ur best