This is a really good poem. i love the ideas in it and the content, i'm not so sure on the structure though. but thats just because i found it difficult to follow for some reason.

Wow... that was amazing... it was so well written and i was just flawless... very very nice job...

sammie

Another beautiful piece. There is nothing much to say, I can claim I understand, I can share pleasantries and past experienced. I can break down the poem, showing what I love about it. But I find that moot. You know I love it, that is all that matters.