Good even though you wrote it for that girl but I wont say her name. But good work on writing this poem.

Great poem, your such a thoughtful guy. a girls perfect man. lol. take care

Awwww...You r a sweetheart..whoever that girl is..she sure is lucky to have a guy like you write such a beautiful poem for her....WOW...Love Joclyn

Whoa that is soo beautiful! just like all the other ppl who commented i think your a sweetie haha, and that the girl the poems for is soo luckey..
xo agde

Awww beautiful poem!!! it's breathtaking. keep it up!
-xXx-

Thank you Robert..u dont know how much this means to me..thank you..Love Always Joclyn

Aww this is so cute:P
pretty much what they said..you sound like an awesome guy..
and you did a good job
keep it up
xoxox

Excellent! 5/5, as the same for the rest of your poetry!

Omg...I really miss all your poems...lol...ok...can't say it's one of your best...but well...i know you've tried...and that's good...always good to see your poems...brighten my day...

That is like the sweetest poem ever! awww! gosh i wish my boyfriend would write me cute and sweet poems like that man!