Comments : Lost one

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Dark!
    Yup this was very dark! Your flow was great and I enjoyed your choice of words!
    I loved this part "When you want to see me, you're shaking in dread
    You can't kill me, I'm already dead" Yeah I really enjoyed that bit!
    Well done, Its a great poem! And a pleasure to read, gave me shivers and your vocab gave a great atmosphere!

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by Navy SweetHeart

    Wow... powerful. i know what you mean though