I kno what you mean...we're blinded from the start..we thik thsi kinda guy is jsut a friend until we find out beneath it all theres more to it...more to him. its amazing..inspiring..love it!! LISSA XOX

Good poem i havea poem liek this sorta its called MY Destiny...anywasy thanxs for your gorgeosu comments! Yess i kow God has implanted me wit a talenta and i use it for him and to its fullest extent! is being descriptive bad? casue i always am its in my bloood i use it all the time. And as for "I'm almost wondering if you write better then i do?" YEaa i dont kno you're good..and your 18 i am only 16 so yeaa probably not. we'll see lol..though i think ur good. by the wya if you give me topics or a title i could write any poem..if you ahve anythign in mind just let me kno hunn! keep reading my poems! lol love xxLISSA

Holy cow... I don't even know what to say. You are so talented, and I loved this poem... Great job!

I loved this one, cuddles! Perfect rhyming and the words just moved me.. =) 5/5

Sounds like love! I really enjoyed this, it's so sweet and straightforward, in particular this line captured me 'I love the way his voice caresses my soul' its completely perfect and flawless. I like how you round it off in the ending aswell, linking everything back up together. Awesome stuff :)