by ...:NiKi:... Nov 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Rain starts to fall, |
by aaron 1 remo
I really liked this poem it flows really well and the imagery is great good job!! |
by xX-jess-Xx
Great poem, i agree about the commas n stuff...but all the same its great without them 5/5 jesxx |
by Natasha
Wauw, amazing.. commas and periods... okay, might help a litle. yet it reads easy anyhow. |
by x-Beth-x
- awesome 5/5 - |
This poem is great, i love the way you used the storm to illustrate your feelings |