Excellent poem, I really understand this and I like how you put all your emotions into the idea of a storm! Very well tought out! I feel the same way with my ex but I think Ill keep running lol.. great idea for a poem great flow and all in all great poem I really enjoyed reading it the atmosphere was extremly good I felt like I was there! great poem! xx

Good job! Only Advice... (I say this to everyone) Commas and periods. They really do help! They are worth the extra effort; they give your poem a rhythm, make words more powerful, and also just make your poem look nicer, this is what I mean when I say commas and periods.
Here is the Original

Rain starts to fall
Slowly at first
The drops fall faster
And then the cloud bursts
My heart is ripped open again
My soul shattered to pieces
I want all of this to end so badly
But the pain never ceases
Why can't I get over you?

Edited version.

Rain starts to fall,
slowly at first,
the drops fall faster,
and then, the cloud bursts.

My heart, is ripped open again,
my soul, shattered to pieces.
I want all of this to end so badly,
but the pain never ceases.

Why can't I get over you?

Now people can tell when a sentence ends and a new one begins. Now the poem flows a little different, because now it has more of a rhythm, it also makes your poem seem longer. And of course I left an empty line, because in my opinion it makes it more organized looking. It also makes it look a bit longer, and it seems to make the poem go smoother. But I guess these are all just my opinion. Other then that Good job! I did like the emotion that you got out in this poem, and the words you chose. Good job!

~Megan~

Great poem. I feel the emotion in it. Keep up the great writing, and btw, I'm from WI too! :) WI RULES!!!! (packers suck!)

This poem is great, i love the way you used the storm to illustrate your feelings

- awesome 5/5 -

Wauw, amazing.. commas and periods... okay, might help a litle. yet it reads easy anyhow.

good job!

Great poem, i agree about the commas n stuff...but all the same its great without them 5/5 jesxx

I really liked this poem it flows really well and the imagery is great good job!!
xaaronx