by brkendown Nov 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I thought he loved me |
by TinyDancer46
Ohh this one is sad :( I hope things get better. It's short, but very good. The only thing I recommend is editting the spelling of falure to failure, and assamed to ashamed. Other than that, this poem is flawless. 5/5 |