Act your age

by xX-jess-Xx   Nov 16, 2005


I don't want to hurt you,
just want to make you see.
I don't want to break both our hearts,
but hes better off for me.

You're the one who said it,
told me he could give me more.
What can he give that you can't?!
god, u make my heart so sore.

I no hes in my year,
and yes he knows me well.
But you were all i wanted,
wow, couldn't you tell?

so fine, i guess its over,
you could at least act seventeen.
Because the way you broke it off,
was just a little mean.

I guess its too late now,
my hearts been devoured.
I just hope you're happy,
You sad little coward.

(this is like the shittiest poem ever, just I'm kinda having writers block at the mo lol but...still...tell me wot ya think)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It wasn't bad, really. I think the message people can relate to and the title was attention getting. Maybe if you want to fix it up add some more details to make an image for us =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Pretty good. 5/5! keep up the great work! :o)

    michelle

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Not bad, but please check the spelling, and maybe some of the i's...
    What, have you ever seen Shakespeare or any other really famous poet have a poem that didn't have the requested capitals and the good spelling?
    Oh, its all a matter of style, I know, but perhaps its a good thing to think about if you want your poetry to be respected.

    Good Writing!
    beth

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