Blow off steam by writing. plz dont change urself for her tho.i did that for a guy once and not only did i lose him, i lost myself.

I know exactly what ur going through and all u can realy do is be with her and show her all she can have if she stays with u try to her mind off the other guy

Wow, it seems like I go through the same things you do. Well, how i delt with it was I tried my hardest not to care about him. (I know its horrible) But it actually worked. I mean, it wasnt a piece of cake, it took like 6 months, but I did it anyways. And now when I see him, he is the one that says hi to me :)

Aw, thank you for your comment your so cute. Im adding you too. :D

-Love always, Jennifer.

But, if you still truely want to be with her, then let her have her space.. The worst thing you could do is to always be there. She would get fed up and never even consider dating you again. And you dont want that.. :) But if she still feels the same way, then go with what I said before.

-Jennifer.

I love the structure of this poem. So full of your thoughts from the heart, really makes it good to read. Keep writing.

I no exactly what you mean. this is a great poem, it flowed so well! i really feel for you cuz i know exactly the feeling! jus keep your head up...itl all work out eventually, if u ever wana talk, jus send me a private message! jesx

Wow...amazing!!! i agree with mistress, give her space. let her decide what she wants. she may just be confused and needs to think it over. just give it time. take care and stay strong!
-xXx-

I know wat ur going through and it really sucks i know!
but just be strong and im sure you can make it through...

For me, my ex now broke up wit me coz he liked my close friend (basically bestf)...and then he wanted me back after...that was so bad.
if u ever wana talk feel free to pm me k!?
much love
xoxox

Aww... first off, she probably isn't that great if she hurt you that bad, second, whoa your an AMAZING poet, and I'm not just saying that, I'm dead serious, you got the flow down, the rhythm down, and the whole package, i'm sure there is someone out there thats perfect for you, that will appreciate you for you, and your amazing abilities to write poetry, awesome job, and just hang in there, please please don't die, you'd really hurt the people around you by doing that, you may not realize it, no one usually does, but I'm sure theres alot of people around you that love you, and you'd hurt them very much if you did anything, just hang in there, hearts heal, the dead don't come back to life, in my mind, a healed heart sounds a lot better.. something you can get over no matter how much it hurts,... again.. amazing poem, great job, 5/5

Great poem mate! It has very good flow! Keep writing!

Hey, that was really sad but if you really love her let her go and be
happier in some other place. doesn't
that make you happy to see her happy?
this poem was really touching.
take care,
marjan

Great poem. A lot of emotion and hurt. I hope things wrok out better for you. I am here if you need to talk. Just PM me.

Tiffany.xox.

The guy I love is with someone else to...Ive liked him for three and a half years and...anyway its hard. But im happy for him, even though im so alone. I feel not good enough but-You just have to tell yourself thats not true. Cause if you dont believe in yourself then your screwed. Just dont give up, try to look elsewhere. Its hard but you have to do something for you. Good luck. Talk to me if ya want...

I know your pain, and I'm very sad to hear that you have to go through that. *tear* nobody should have their heart broken like that. But everything happens for a reason, and when you find out that reason, please come tell me. You're an awesome poet, and you're so good at expressing your feelings. I send my love to you and wish you the best. keep strong

Don't change yourself at all!! But it depends on how you feel for her, what you should do!! If you truly feel deeply about, let her see you are the guy for her!! Remember, smallest gestures are the grandest gestures!! Show up unexpected, give her little surprises here and there!! But, be careful, and make sure it's worth it, it'll probably be a rocky road!! Just be steadfast, but don't be relentless!! Be kind and caring, not over protective!! (sry if it don't make much sense, hope it helps)

Wow i serioulsy love your poems... they are wonderful... and wow just amazing...

sammie

Thank you..

David,
I'm going through the same exact thing.
It does hurt. But you have to keep your mind off of her and keep yourself busy. It will get better.
5/5

Great poem, i liked the detail and expression you put in the poem, 5/5 as usual

A really sad poem..but really good too.keep it up mate and keep strong!
xxx