Ill try..

I know i was only supposed to read one of ur poems..but i think i'm addicted to ur poems...and i think that u shouldn't change 4 her...she should change 4 u and she has obviously put you thru a lot of pain and it really shows...if she truly loved u like she claimed she did she would have told u the truth...keep up the great job...5/5

I love this poem, its so sad yet heartfelt. Its amazingly written, well done
keep it up
Tara xxx

This is very powerfu! I've been on both ends and can completely relate! Fantastic poem!

Im going thru the same thing with my ex right now, if your ment to be than you guys will be together, maybe she just needs some time to figure out what she wants :(

The poem was nice I knew what you might have been trying to say I just think that you were also more focused on rhyming than getting your point across. Its ok if not every line rhymes exactly as long as your story is clear.

And as far as wanting others to tell you what you should do only you know what to do
but I will share my story with you if you'd like.
And it may help you to heal a little fatser if you are interested in hearing it writing me back!!!

Much Luv -VICKIE-

:O Wow, that was......wow, great piece, couldnt pick it apart at all, you have a real gift, i like your work because its so true and also faintly similar to the style that i write in, great job, great rhyme, perfect rythym, lovely story, great work.