I loved ur poems is so cute and is so weird ciz it reminds me of my own lil story... but i love dis part:

I know that you feel me,
I know that you see.
But then theres your girlfriend,
And then theres me.

Won't you just trust me,
Let go of her hand.
I'll take you away,
To our own little land.

That actually feels like sumething i would write... cuz is part of my life and my story.... keep on writing u are really good =)

Fantastic job, your rhyming pattern was great and your choice of words were amazing.

This is a beautiful poem! Great expression! I can completely relate to this.

I like this one

sort of reminds me of a song by The Used that i was listening to the other day

the twist at the end is good, the whole i need this & this is how it could be

top notch!

A sad little setiment for both of the women in this poem. Good job.