by Love Fallacy Nov 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
A treasure chest locked up real tight, |
by Dreams
Wonderful descriptions you have there. Using chest, treasure and relating them to love, pain and hurt. Your creativity do soar good. I like the second stanza very much, it's a very special way to describe the feeling. I've enjoyed this. =) |
I loved it. i kno how that feels. it was a great piece of work. keep writing. |