Very advanced writing, your talent is quite stunning! v.good poem, i liked the ending especially. keep it up,
emma xxx

Damn I don't get it! grrr. I'm trying to understand, but I am just failing.

What I got was "building something up from the nothing, and than seeing it fall down" I'm sorry if i got that wrong. But you are very talented, cause it's very beautiful writin! Keep up the good work!
And don't feel bad cause I didn't get it, cause I'm just lil stupid me :P ghehe

Wow, Exceptionally outstanding. I loved every bit of this poem it's just so unique & in it's own element, I think it's fantaastic, well done mydear, take care

I think I get it...or maybe I don't...yet I still think it's awesome...the usage of words...I really don't know how to descibe it...and hmm...don't worry...sometimes I get confuse with my own poems 2...haha...dunno y...just do...neway...to get the forum award...oh that...hmm...join the discussion...whether it's the club discussion or the site's...just post ur thoughts...or stuff u want people 2 c...well that's it...

Lol..um matt....u're not supposed to write challenging things like this for me to read:(!!!
ha...nah i'm kindding that was exceptionally awesome:P
Man i look up to u..(although i;m probably taller than you in real life...hmmm)...
lol..sorry weird mood:P
u're awesome matt..don't ever change...
U're on my profile now:)
take care xoxoxoxo

Woah...gr8 poem, keep up the good work and i wont be surprised if you go far.
-elizabeth-

Great peom
yeah its confusing but under the confusion it is understandable
either way i like it and it flows really well with the rhyming shceme you chose goog job 5/5

This is different... very interesting... i had to read it 3times for me to be able to understand it... i liked it... very neat...
hope u pass by mine sometimes...
votes and comments much appreciated...
much love

I liked this a lot. Not really confusing, to me anyway. 5/5

-Taylor

WOW!!!! love it you've based it on a greath theme, cheak out my poems i think you may enjoy them
jodie
xxx

Amazing poem..
you're a very talented writer,
hopefully i'll see more of your work on here!!

I think im going to read this one a million times, but even if it is hard to get, i would probably read it a million times just because its good......very good...i love the different words...

I luv'd ur poem......u've got talent!!itz so different 2 everyone elses poems and datz makes it even betta keep it up!!

I like it...even though I don't get but...it's good!

Sad...but really good

This poem is awsome, it's so deep, and can take on so many different meanings, depending on how u look at it

Wow, this poem is a big pile of crap. Gross, you suck dude. 1/5 Your mom's a S L U T, go to hell 1/5

Holy *some word i can't say* you are one heck of a writer.. I'm jealous... teehee.. you have a really goood way with words.. keeep it up!!

I can't really form a story or meaning from the start of the poem, however the ending does strike something to me. But still, I can't really pen down my thoughts on this poem, there're many ways one can interpret from this poem. I decided to see it as a so called 'perfect' life created by one hands and also it's being destroyed by that same pair of hands. Though I'm not sure if I make sense here! lol. Anyway, this is one poem that makes you think and you wouldn't mind reading it over and over. This is a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing. =)

I'm probably being thick, but I don't quite understand it, stunning imagery though, keep it up!
Luv Helen xxx