by xEmmax
Excellent poem yet again! but very sad, i can really relate to this.5/5. take care, |
I love the poem beccy i can realli relate |
by Natasha
It is indeed sad, but somehow sadness can be beautifull when put out right. |
by Amanda
Omg this one is really good and sad :( |
by Torn
Awesome poem hun..god it's so true. |
by Becky Karen
I realy like your poem, iv read a few of them, your realy a great poet. please keep writting. Becky x |
Omg very very good i can relate to it you are a really good poem writer keep up the good work good luck with everything |
Everybody has a different way of expressing dark truths about their true nature. This poem certainly sums this up with your use of "the mask". Anyone with any emotional difficulty can relate to falsifying emotions when communicating with other people. It's a daily struggle that I'm told we conquer. |
by yaRis
Hey Becky HOLA! lol well gurl 1st thanx for commenting on my poem She is me... 2nd that's funny what u said about u liking puerto ricans lol.. i mean is okay being puerto rican no biggie cuz then again we are american so we ain't da different (dat's da only part i don't like we aint 2 different but oh well we still have a lil differences lol specially XMAS lol and da way our homw land looks) n e ways i was reading your poem and i liked it alot cuz well u already read my poems she is me and well is sad true but sad and is funny dat u wrote about a mask because alot of time in my real life i have to pretend and tell everyone im okay when im really not so i guess i am too wearing a mask ....oh well stay sweet gurla CUIDATE (aka: take care) Adios Chula (aka;bye sweety) =) lol |
Wow, i love it. i can relate. excellent job. 5/5 |
by VioletRaven
This Is So True! It's as though you have seen into my own experiences! I wish that none of us had to hide behind the mask and yet it is all that keeps us safe. |
by Emma
Wow. i loved it. i find myself feeling like that. it was beauitful. keep up the great work. |
by Carrie
Great poem... I loved it... I can relate to it... 5/5 |
by Erica
This poem is truly touching, i can relate to it alot, thank you for it. Great poem 5l5 |