Will you be my wife??

by The Poetic Child   Nov 17, 2005


I was about to give up
I was going to love no more
Then u came up
and opened another door

The door you opened,
was me to your heart
captured by your beauty
Right from very start

Now 7 months later
We are still in love
every chance i get
i thank god above

he gave me this shot
with a beautiful girl
and now i stand here now
and say you are my world

everything u have
looks perfect in every way
From top to the bottom
No words can say

your so beautiful
your looks attach to my head
i have endless dreams of you
when i sleep and go to bed

i have endless feelings
and endless emotion
picturing us on the beach
with the breach breeze of the ocean

you bring eternal happiness
into my life
so i have this one question for you
Will you be my wife???

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.........there are no words to describe how amazing this poem is...but i agree you are only 14... love her now and marry her later but you kno i cant really say nething about that kuz im 16 and my bf asked me what i would say if he asked me to marry him and i told him id absolutely say yes...excellent poem!!!...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Awww so did u really ask her to marry you or was that jjus a poem expressing ur feelings? Cuase that was so damn amazing i like where you took that poem.

    LISSA

  • 19 years ago

    by christina marie

    Yes...LOL
    love you!
    bye!

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    And now i stand here now
    and say you are my world
    I think you should pick on NOW over the other. And I stand here now - maybe?

    Beautiful poem Mr. Smoothie! I love it! And I will say that your girl is quite lucky. However, you are 14 don't be asking no one to be your wife!! lol I made that mistake...well I said yes...I didn't ask! LMAO Love her now marry her later....HAHAHA Nicely done my friend!

  • 19 years ago

    by flawed diamond

    The girl you wrote this for is really lucky. This was expressed so beautifully. Nice job. 5/5

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