The girl you wrote this for is really lucky. This was expressed so beautifully. Nice job. 5/5

And now i stand here now
and say you are my world
I think you should pick on NOW over the other. And I stand here now - maybe?

Beautiful poem Mr. Smoothie! I love it! And I will say that your girl is quite lucky. However, you are 14 don't be asking no one to be your wife!! lol I made that mistake...well I said yes...I didn't ask! LMAO Love her now marry her later....HAHAHA Nicely done my friend!

Yes...LOL
love you!
bye!

Awww so did u really ask her to marry you or was that jjus a poem expressing ur feelings? Cuase that was so damn amazing i like where you took that poem.

LISSA

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.........there are no words to describe how amazing this poem is...but i agree you are only 14... love her now and marry her later but you kno i cant really say nething about that kuz im 16 and my bf asked me what i would say if he asked me to marry him and i told him id absolutely say yes...excellent poem!!!...
~Sandra~