Luv'd it........its so long, id neva b able 2 rite ne thing dat long.....hmmmmmm well gr8 job.i no wat itz like 2 c somones life faslling apart dat u relli care about

This poem is amazing, you have great talent..don't give up, things will start to look better! cause when things seem to be at there worst then they can only get better

5/5 very well written loin it hey i hope you don't mind but i am goona take some of you poem "Do you remember the world before your drugs?
Remember how you showed me the way
Do you remember all the supporting hugs?
Before you let your life decay?

Do you remember who you were before?
When you were always there for me
Do you remember the things before you rotted your core?
And now I am the one making you believe and see" b/c i love and but don't worry i will put u in tell ppl i toold that part from u comment on my poems please and vote-Liz

Wow, this is an excellent poem! so heartfelt, u can feel the emotions written. congrats, 5/5!
keep writing, you have so much potential.
xxx

I really like this poem...its very good! good work!