Amazing job. to me at the end it seems like when it said it started with a kiss and ended with the knife to me it sounded like your boyfriend made you commit suicide how you had it like that which was great to know that because i really liked the ending. You did an amazing job. That just one thing your boyfriend can say or do can make you do the most stupiest thing ever or even cut infact. But anyway amazing job once again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. ps: thanks for the rates and comments mean alot to me.