They Don't Care...

by SoRrOwFuL Claire   Nov 17, 2005


COULD YOU PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT (i need some constructive critisism) THANX!!

I'm so alone
Set me free
From my pain
And misery

I can't go on
I need you here
I want some truth
To appear

I'm by myself
No one cares
Everyone is
Unaware

The pain is real
Not a lie
They don't believe
They don't try

I want life
To be great
Without the loss
Without the hate

So don't ask
When I cry
You won't listen
You won't try

For Amy ... I hope you're at peace

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffani

    This was very sad, but it was still a very very well writin peice, LOVED IT!! 5/5

    Much love Tiffani

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    That was really good and I bet your firend will aprasiate that. very nice.xox Rachel

  • 18 years ago

    by SoRrOwFuL Claire

    Hey everyone. yes this poem is about a friend of mine who was going through a bad time and i wanted to express her feelings through this. i hope it brought you justice amy!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Thats a really sweet piece Claire! In criquing, make sure your words make sense, like unawares. Check out www.urbis.com its a great new site for constructive critisim.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Omg claire! thats amazing!
    when i read this i seriously started crying! omg im still in shock
    thats soo good
    luv ya heaps
    amy

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