Wow this poem is so real. thats what i like so much about your work- everything you write about is so real you can feel it. god your such a good writer! i'm jealous. hang in there babe were gonna get thru this! lyl~lex

Aw wow hun, this is very deep and it made me sad cause i can relate to it as well, stay strong my dear we can make it through this together, i loved the last verse it is so true it brought me to tears "It seems hope is really bleak,
Because these walls are closing in.
" Wow breath taking well done

Aww wow what i great poem it was very deep i can relate thats why i ask god to for give me each night

"It seems hope is really bleak,
Because these walls are closing in.
I'm crumbling under the weight,
Of my every little sin."

That part was just... fantastic. This poem is perfect, the flow, the rythm, the words, the everything. Completely flawless. Yet...

Very sad. You gotta look up in your life, be a happier person. You only have one life, you've gotta live it. I'm sorry if your life is rough, but you'll get through. And remember, you've always got me here to talk. My screenname is Matt Has Written if you ever want to IM me. You've got me here. And thnaks for the comment. You don't change either.

Oooh wait I have a little "anecdote" for you. Last year, in sixth grade, there was this girl at my school named Anna. Now she was really mean and obnoxious, and I didn't like her. She has now moved away and became what you'd call... hmm... "The school joke." I was basically turned off from all Annas. But then I met you, and we talk, and I feel completely wrong and changed. Now I know-- ANNA"S ROCK! Lol. You must be bored reading this. Well bye. Full points.

Signed:

The best kid on this site so HA! Just kidding.

_______________________Matt_____________________

Your a very good writer.... *5/5*

Really great poem hun, i love y0our style! hope u r ok! hun hold on it wll get better! life is hard but hey it is 4 everyone...im sorry y0o feel so much pain but hang in ther coz it will get better, there must b something u r living 4 otherwise u wouldn't b here now would y0o? luv ya lots

Very good..I liked it alot..Thank you for commenting on my poetry...It means alot..Much Love Joclyn

Beautifully written :)

Ugh... new poem :=( " Broken Hearts".. it almost made me cry writing it.

I see most of them hev say what I want to say...guess that makes me nothing left to say...oh well...this is cool...

This poem is awesome, good job.

Wow, so so so good, and betetr than anything i could write! well done, its really deep, and i love the way it rhymes it all just flows so well, its so good, well done, keep up the good work!

well done
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Great piece. Nice use of words. Keep it up.

What a beautiful poem. .... I just had to sit there a minute and let it soak in.

Thank you for sharing it.

Wow... this is a powerful poem, i can feel the emotion!! ur a very talented writter, keep the excellent work up... 5/5 xoxox

Wow. Stunned again, I used to think it took quite a lot to make me speechless, but it's happening quite often now, and I'm going to blame it on you! :-P 5/5!

Good poem babe, don't like wot its about though but good work!

Nice poem!

you have such power in your words