by Bhavin Nov 17, 2005
category :
Special events /
birthday
The most awaited day of her life has arrived. |
by Goran Rahim
Omg, I don't know even what to write. since I am in this site this poem touched me the most. Yeah you can relate it to my poem The luckiest guy, but by far this is much better. better word choice and much deeper. I have not seen this day yet, her wedding, but unfortunatily i think i will soon, so i have to add u to my favorite so i don't lose this poem. |
by Kaylee
I don't know about so many excliamation points at the end because it seems to shout too much. But the poem again was brilliant with imagery. I also think maybe cut out the one word her (the first) in this sentence but it's up to you. |
by shobhana kumar
This is so sad, beautiful and wonderfully written, Bhavin. i do hope this was your imagination and not something that really happened to you. |
by CIEL
Beautifull what talent!! |
by CIEL
Beautifull what talent!! |