This is a good way to look at losing someone you love so dearly. I really like and hope to see more by you!

Beautifull what talent!!

Beautifull what talent!!

This is so sad, beautiful and wonderfully written, Bhavin. i do hope this was your imagination and not something that really happened to you.

take care. and always believe that there is someone better waiting for you.

good luck and peace
shobhana

I don't know about so many excliamation points at the end because it seems to shout too much. But the poem again was brilliant with imagery. I also think maybe cut out the one word her (the first) in this sentence but it's up to you.

Everyone's watching her because it's her wedding today.

Omg, I don't know even what to write. since I am in this site this poem touched me the most. Yeah you can relate it to my poem The luckiest guy, but by far this is much better. better word choice and much deeper. I have not seen this day yet, her wedding, but unfortunatily i think i will soon, so i have to add u to my favorite so i don't lose this poem.
I think it is a great poem and it is much more important than everyone else think, as i really feel what u r going true,
5/5