Bill ...
No I think it is wonderful as it is except.... for one little part

Smiling I realize
I have laughed more
Been truly happy
Since she came into my life

( I would maybe suggest )

Since she came into my life
...Since Steph came into my life...

Being that I know you I understand the she but to others it would be confusing...But that's just my opinion ...
As always your love poems touch me and this one is no different ...
Straight from the heart of love ...
~Hugs to
you , Stephanie and your son~

I am so happy for you! I've read both poems that you suggested in the thread you started about the divorce section. I wish you and your son nothing but happiness from here on out!
Beautifully conveyed! Take care....Holly

Im so srry for you!!!! i hope this is not a experience.. but good poem.

Im so happy for u yet srry if thats true. neway gr8 poem!!! i'd give it a 10 if i could!!

.::Diana::.

God doesnt give us what we cant handle. and things always happens for a reason.. I have had my doubts from time to time with those sayings. But with your poem it puts more meaning to those saying:) great poem!

Very, very sad...and very beautiful ;(