by **dare~2~breathe** Nov 17, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Hayley Gallagher 1989-2005 |
by Whittney
Wow, what a great poem. you have an amazing talent and everything in your poems is so strong and moving, keep it up!~whittney |
by HansRik
I verily liked this poem, its imagery and its diction. If I were to recommend something though, that would be a better development to facilitate flow between the stanzas. Well done nonetheless! |
by Amby Mae
Great poem it made me sad.. great job! |
by Gemmie Lou
You really write your emotions into this poem hun 5/5 xxxx |