Comments : Psychopathic Path (verse 2)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaky

    IT looks like you have a very violent mind.I liked it

  • 19 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Phenomenal. That was truley a very well written poem and really intrigued me with its anger filled emotions and how it was all expressed on the sheet. You've done really well on this- keep the chin up and keep the poems coming :)...

    Much love and God bless,
    FalLEN*-

    P.S: *Not happy at all going thorough a life altering phase/ So angry mind bestowed with rage/ No one cared for his opinion because of his young age/...... Blinded by his soft composure/ No one really knew the pain she was under/ School floors drenched in red/* Fantastically written ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by LiL Ma

    Damm babe
    This poem is amazing
    I don't think yu realize the amazin gift you've been blessed with
    Keep it up love