That's a good poem, and I hope you are not writing about yourself. Well, let me just say, people like that, are people too, and they live their life like that, and they shouldn'tbe criticized, because no one is perfect. Just let them be who they want to be, we cannot change them or tell them how to act. Remember that.

Hehehe, I'm sure everyone knows someone who they can relate to this poem! The topic is good, but I think that your rhythm and just how you have presented it makes it stand out and makes it sound more mature as opposed to just another poem complaining about someone. :)