Yo girl, dat was hott. I'm gon' thru dat same junk riigh bout now so I know how dat feel. Ne-wayz good flow, and sweet message. Lookin forward to readin more from ya. Later

Hey grl diz iz a hella of a good poem! i hope u doing aight w/out "Marco."

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Mami..that poem is it...it so real and true just showing you mad love....muahzzzz

Are you mexican?

::MELI::

Hey - your poem is incredible! I'm amazed at how you can capture so much. It's so deep that after reading it - I just had to sit for a minute and think about it.

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Awww hun, you did an amazing job! I love the way you expressed the emotions of this poem, keep up the great work!

Awesome! \m/

Thats sad but good ohh god its david all over again sorry for you girl I know what you are feeling this is my sisters ex and hes the guy in the poem today and she still loves him to

Actually no, I didnt get your pics. My e-mail adress is tricksrwatugt@aim.com, or mperez@mckenzietank.com. Thats my work e-mail. Try again please. And girl I know what you mean. But guess what, I went to visit my ex the other day and he wants us back together. I am so happy, cus you know he says he's thru with all the gang and drugs and stuff. And I so want to believe him, key word is WANT to but I cant right now, but I am willing to give it another try. He writes all the time now and calls me like every other day. I love him, I love the guy I mess with too though.....AGH this is so confusing. What should I do ma? Anyways thank you for all your comments. They really mean alot to me. Why aint you writting. In your one comment you practically wrote one. Go for it. Put your life into the poem and I swear they will be awesome. Dont try to make since of what you write just let the pen flow...... Love you,

::MELI::

Hey you got reel talent and thats kinda what happened to friend of mine and i know how you feel .........well i can only imagine

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Damn mami dats some good shit...no doubt keep doin ya thang iight mami one luv

Hey gurl it was grat it totally felt what u r going through i hope can work threw it it was a awsome poem ttyl

Damn girl, that is true everything u say in this poem.i know where your coming from just stick with it.

Hey grl nice poem you gots there...dont get caught up in thoes s***......but you got a real nice poem dough

Wow....i rlly like it. awesome. my poems r nothing like theses tho...job well done stamp it a 5

Hey thats a wicked poemmmi love it! i think its really cool although its sad too! really sweet..
xxx

Gurrl dat waz hott lol

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